Malala is really a brave girl. If I were she, I wouldn't stand out to fight for myself because I am very coward and afraid of die. Although she is only 17 years old, she has an ambitious thought that I have ever seen. It is a good news for the earth society to have such a kind girl who struggle for girls' rights.
I consider she is a courage girl to fight for her educationam right. Even though the terrorists shoted at her head , she didn't give up and still persist in her opinion. Through this bullet people around the world saw how cruel the organization was. Therefore, many countries started helping Malala retrieve their educational rights. It makas fell very sad because we get this right very easy but they should use their lives to strive for. I think we should be content and cherished all thing we have.
Malala is really a brave girl. If I were she, I wouldn't stand out to fight for myself because I am very coward and afraid of die. Although she is only 17 years old, she has an ambitious thought that I have ever seen. It is a good news for the earth society to have such a kind girl who struggle for girls' rights.
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I consider she is a courage girl to fight for her educationam right. Even though the terrorists shoted at her head , she didn't give up and still persist in her opinion. Through this bullet people around the world saw how cruel
回覆刪除the organization was. Therefore, many countries started helping Malala retrieve their educational rights. It makas fell very sad because we get this right very easy but they should use their lives to strive for. I think we should be content and cherished all thing we have.